jo’ inspiration’ banti hai mazeed izhaar k liye…….Izhaar….jo kissi ka bhi hamiasha ‘perfect’ nahin hua.See more Yaani maayaar tou badaltay hi rehtay hein, Assal cheeze tou jazbon ki sachai aur kaawishon ka khuloos hona chahiye, aur yeh donon cheezen meri naaqis tareen rai mein hamaisha, hamaisha daad ki mustahiq hoti hein……Daad….
Agar baat kissi ‘already acheived’ maayaar par hamaisha qaim rehnay ki hoti tou Mopissan aur Remberandt jaisay mussawiron kay bekaar tareen(naaqideen ki rai mein) aur naMukkammil sketches kabhi haathon haath farokht na hotay aur na aaj tak ‘demand’ mein rehtay, na Ghalib apna poora deewaan aik sher kay iwaz dainay ko tayyar ho jaatay. Shaairi ko ‘art’ kee aur bohat si asnaf ki tarha aik zareeae …izhar samajhta hoon. Mehmood Khan manna parhega keh aap shaaoro achee kurrtee heinįarzana, yahaan muamla thora sa mukhtalif hai, shayad iss liye kay mein nay aap ko ziadah nahin parha, aur shayad iss liye bhi kay na tou mein shair hoon aur na saahib e kitaab. Sajid Ali Boot Khoob Bohoot hi khoob, koi sani nahi. Waqas Arshad zaberdast kiya khanay !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hamesha aiesa hi karti ho tum…yehi baat main kami se kahi thi k jis waqt tum ghazal post karne se pehle sellect karo kash us waqt tum Ali zaryoun ban jaya karo…is ghazal se kahin behter ghazlen tum nay kahin hui hain.pata nahi flue hon…e k baad janab ki yaddasht kam ho gayi hay k un ghazlon ki taraf dhayan hi nahi r phir tumhari nazmain apni misaal aap hain.is ghazal pe meri taraf se tumhare liye chaye ka bare wala cup.pio aur foran apne pc ka wo folder open karo jahan tum nay apni wo nazmain sambhali hui hain jin ko parhte hue mujhe tumhrai dosti par fakhr hota hay.Īb kahin yeh mat samjh lena k yeh ghazal achi nahi.yeh b achi hay…but tamkinat nay kitna sahi kaha k ap ki baqi ghazlon jeis nahi.ab agar janab aap ka thora dhayan ghar k kaamon,pholon ko sajane,bachon k muamlat dekhne aur “khane peene” se hate to apni wo nazmain aur ghazlen yahan post karo jo tumhari kitaab mein moujood hain. Khalid Mahmood Ata Beautiful Ghazal, well balanced… Splendid Work!īohat achha shair hay…mubarak ho Ferzana Ji.Īap nay matla “HATON” sey bund kerkay “WATON” sey bina chaabi khol diya….Hummmm!!!!!! Nasim Syed Farzana are bhaee tum se to milna pRy ga Tamkinat Mahmood Hina aap ke doosri ghazlon jsesee naheen lagi…yeh… Salman Raza Wah Wah Wah Kia Kaihna Farzana Ka bohot khob….īohat khoob sahaili.Kia baat hai.See moreįarzana Khan Ooohh, thanks my sweet, so nice of you to encourage straight away….Bohut sa purkhuloos pyaar ?Ībdul Qayyum Khan Bangash Very Beautiful!įarzana Rafique Bohat khoob! kya ghazal hai,aap tu chaa gai hain ? Sohail Majeed Naina acha lekha he daad hazir he… Mahtab Qadr Wah wah bahut khoobsurat andaz e bayaN aur Radeef ke sath insaaf qabil e mubarakbaad haiN.Īkhtar Amin Farzana bohat achah Ghazal hi is very appreciableįarzana Khan Thanx a lot Akhtar Sahib, keep up your support. :)įarzana Khan Thank you Samina, I’m glad that you liked It. after reading this.:$įarzana Khan Bohut Khoob Shay, kaise ho babu, hope exams not bothering too much…!įarzana Khan Thanks Rahimoon, lekin daad kis ko di hai ? Gul-o gulshan main rehi, teray afqar ki dhunn Wohi qissa reha dil-e nadaa’n kay jhagroon ka… Raat, din ki lagawaton mein gum Chehre tau roshni se bante hainĪaeenee hain banawaton mein gum Meri paa’zeib raqs mein zakhmiīazm hai jhanjhana’haton mein gum Aah O naale ki teiz yorish mein Jism hai thar’tharahaton mein gum Hon abhi tere dil ke jungle mein Gul ruton ki tarawaton mein gum Jism O Jaan hain rukawaton mein gum Aakh lai thi qarz beenaiĪb ye hai jagmaga’haton mein gum Chandni khul ke ro nahi sakti
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